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Old 05-02-2003, 06:32 AM   #1 (permalink)
Crazy
 
Location: Perth
Just Another Poem

Consequence

Shallow thoughts,
The mind wanders,
Consequence unthought of.

They lay across the cold surface,
Tender, yet unaware,
The essence of life inside them.

The Goosebumps shudder over,
The pale, clammy flesh,
As fingers find their grip.

The silver moonlight glistens,
Off the murky waters,
What is to become?

In the mind of the beholder,
Lies a deep secret
A painful memory.

Eyes stare, then move,
To look at their reflection,
Cold, dark, deep.

The heavy hand,
Blood racing through,
Lifts the mighty blade.

The sweat,
The tears,
Will not persuade.

Pain engulfs the arm
And spreads throughout the body,
Of this tearful, lonely girl.

The body slumps to the dirt,
Like a petal of a rose,
Limp, motionless.

The heart trembles,
Its final beat ticks over,
This precious soul is dead.

The soul transcends to heaven
Unaware of the pain it has caused,
Not even consequence.
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Old 05-02-2003, 06:53 AM   #2 (permalink)
Junkie
 
Location: Utah
Wow, I like this a lot. Very good, thanks
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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
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Old 05-02-2003, 07:27 AM   #3 (permalink)
Upright
 
Location: Kansas
Great work. I love how i got lost in your words.
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