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fallen_angel · 10-12-2003, 11:14 PM

Please help me
I'm breaking down
Slowly, yet consistantly
I fall deeper
Closer to my breaking point
My will has been bent
My mind and body ache
My future is unclear
I'm falling
My wings have been broken
Under a burden I can no longer bear
The end is ahead
Racing into my line of vision
I'm swimming in a thick fog
Of my own making
My fall has ended
I am broken

Esen · 10-13-2003, 02:08 AM

I like your poems , thank you for sharing them

Angel · 10-13-2003, 06:02 PM

As deep and moving as your work is, and as much as I enjoy it, I'd give much to instill a happiness in you that brings forth a poem from your soul filled with contentment.

*hugs*

This is a very good piece of work.
~Angel~

fallen_angel · 10-13-2003, 06:59 PM

i am currently at a point in my life that is drepressingly bleak. Nothing is going right and everything i do feels wrong. Im just glad i have this outlet because in my earlier times i did not have this luxury and turned to other ways to cope.

chavos · 10-13-2003, 07:07 PM

hauntingly familiar-i have such a memory of being in that place in life. may peace be with you...

riptide4070 · 10-15-2003, 03:05 PM

my life is depressing and yet so joyful at the same time. I feel lost. I'm waiting to find my inner strength, but not as before. It must reach new heights so I can be happy and prolific.

I feel your words, through and through.

10-12-2003, 11:14 PM	#1 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	Broken Please help me I'm breaking down Slowly, yet consistantly I fall deeper Closer to my breaking point My will has been bent My mind and body ache My future is unclear I'm falling My wings have been broken Under a burden I can no longer bear The end is ahead Racing into my line of vision I'm swimming in a thick fog Of my own making My fall has ended I am broken __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel Last edited by fallen_angel; 10-14-2003 at 12:01 PM..

10-13-2003, 02:08 AM	#2 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	I like your poems , thank you for sharing them __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

10-13-2003, 06:02 PM	#3 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	As deep and moving as your work is, and as much as I enjoy it, I'd give much to instill a happiness in you that brings forth a poem from your soul filled with contentment. hugs This is a very good piece of work. ~Angel~ __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

10-13-2003, 06:59 PM	#4 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	i am currently at a point in my life that is drepressingly bleak. Nothing is going right and everything i do feels wrong. Im just glad i have this outlet because in my earlier times i did not have this luxury and turned to other ways to cope. __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel

10-15-2003, 03:05 PM	#6 (permalink)
riptide4070 Addict Location: Boone, NC	my life is depressing and yet so joyful at the same time. I feel lost. I'm waiting to find my inner strength, but not as before. It must reach new heights so I can be happy and prolific. I feel your words, through and through. __________________ "the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'

10-13-2003, 07:07 PM	#5 (permalink)
chavos Banned Location: St. Paul, MN	hauntingly familiar-i have such a memory of being in that place in life. may peace be with you...