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Old 04-20-2003, 01:48 AM   #1 (permalink)
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A Song

Fantasy no longer satisfies me.
I need your touch; your empathy;
Your soft, moist lips; your warm embrace;
Your loving eyes; your exquisite taste.

When we're together, you are my all,
My Summer, Winter, Spring and Fall
You soothe away the pain and fuss,
When you and I become just 'us'.

Sometimes my jealousy betrays me.
Although I know you never would.
A little voice inside persuades me
that if I turned away you could.

I always want to let you in,
But every time I start,
I fear my fumbling touch wil crush
the petals of your heart.
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Old 04-20-2003, 02:07 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I've worked out some chords for this. They're a bit generic, but they might give a better feel for the song for anyone who's interested. I'll put them up so I can remember them, anyway.

Am Aminmaj7
Fantasy no longer satisfies me.
Am7 Em
I need your touch; your empathy;
F G
Your soft, moist lips; your warm embrace;
Am G
Your loving eyes; your exquisite taste.



Am Aminmaj7
When we're together, you are my all,
Am7 Em
My Summer, Winter, Spring and Fall
F G
You soothe away the pain and fuss,
Am G
When you and I become just 'us'.



C Em Am Em F
Sometimes my jealousy betrays me.
G C G
Although I know you never would.
C Em Am Em F
A little voice inside persuades me
G C G
that if I turned away you could.

F G C G F
I always want to let you closer,
G C G F
But every single time I start,
G C F
I fear my fumbling touch wil crush
G C
the delicate petals of your heart.
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Old 04-20-2003, 02:09 AM   #3 (permalink)
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That came out wrong. Anyone know how to keep spaces?
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Old 04-20-2003, 07:04 AM   #4 (permalink)
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This is wonderful!

Your last line pulls on me most as it is my very fear.

Thank you for sharing.

(You expressed yourself well.)
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Old 04-20-2003, 08:53 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks Angel

I was inspired by what you said yesterday, so I thought I'd have a go.
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Old 04-24-2003, 10:39 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I feel wierd just posting random "Good work"s and "Fantastic"s so I try to keep my compliments for the pieces I really enjoy. I'm a sucker for meter, and things that can sound good to the ear without meaning as well as the meaning behind the words, this is good stuf.
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