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Nightmare
Get out
Get out I cant stand this It hurts Just leave Get out Pain, agony Breathless, struggling Run, hide Screaming Panic Gasping for air Leave me alone Why me Why me Cold, wet Limping Hurt Caught Cant move, cant yell Metal flesh Trigger Lightening Silence |
Sounds almost like lyrics for a Nu-Metal band.
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Hey Sarah,
I'm hardly one to critique poetry. But, it sounds pretty cool to me. There are very little words, but it paints a pretty detailed picture. Thanks for sharing. |
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