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|  10-24-2004, 06:24 PM | #1 (permalink) | 
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				just finished my first painting and thought id share
			 hey, well i know its nothing amazing, it is my first painting and all...but i thought it came out pretty well. its a painting of a columbine flower that i saw when i was in colorado this past summer.  | 
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|  10-27-2004, 05:25 AM | #5 (permalink) | 
| Tilted | Good job, a great start. I like your colours. If I may, here are a few suggestions for the future. Try make the shapes more intentional, have clean, sharp lines. If you create a shape, it needs to be a confident shape. Your leaves tend to be a bit insecure. The focal point tends to work better off centre, try put the focal point 2 thirds across and 2 thirds up. Work that is bold like yours needs a little hint of detail somewhere. Like music you need base notes, but the little details, tinkles, touches give work more depth. It's nice to discover things in an images from 2 meters to 2 feet. Good luck, and keep at it! 
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